External Reviewer − Antonio Tencati
External Reviewer − Nicola Misani, Bocconi University
- Strategy Business Unit instead of Strategic Business Unit
- quality of English is not strong enough for a scientific publication and, in particular, for a
PhD Thesis.
External Reviewer − Nicola Misani, Bocconi University
- to improve, strengthen, clarify, and make the overall study more robust
case study (p.51) is not cleary connected to the purposes of the thesis
empirical method to test various hypotheses are really disparate. to create presentation of methodology strategy that the candidate intends to follow in testing the hypotheses
to improve structure, presentation and methodology, eliminating typos and bed sentence structure
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